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Post by Riverrun Kennel on May 31, 2016 17:22:37 GMT -5
I don't know where to put this so  Here you will be able to critique my work! Since I love getting help from the community :3 |
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Post by Bari on May 31, 2016 19:28:22 GMT -5
Hello! I think it looks great so far! I'm no expert but I would make the eyes a bit smaller and the head more elongated. kinda like this  |
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Post by Riverrun Kennel on May 31, 2016 19:37:46 GMT -5
Thanks! Like this?  |
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Post by Bari on May 31, 2016 20:07:57 GMT -5
Yes! Maybe make the eye placement a bit closer together. They seem a bit wide. Here are a few extra images to help you with the head (i find the head, specially the muzzle to be the hardest part to make for any breed!). As I said, I'm no expert, but I hope it helps! |
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Post by Riverrun Kennel on May 31, 2016 20:16:49 GMT -5
 Thanks ^-^ |
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Post by Bari on May 31, 2016 20:20:53 GMT -5
No problem! Maybe its the angle, but his head looks a bit wide? i'm sorry if I'm so nitpicky. i think it's looking great  is this your first BC template? |
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Post by Riverrun Kennel on May 31, 2016 20:27:11 GMT -5
Haha it's fine :3 Thanks for your help! And it is not exactly my first BC template, but I just relized my old one is really bad XD
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Post by Bari on May 31, 2016 20:30:32 GMT -5
Still! It's pretty good! When I first started I attempted to make a BC and it turned out so bad I deleted and decided I was horrible at making any sort of template. Luckily, seeing other kennel's amazing work inspired me to try template-making again. Haven't tried a BC again but most of the dogs I own now are made from scratch and I'm pretty happy (my first BC's were taken all from the SKC show BC template) |
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Post by Riverrun Kennel on May 31, 2016 20:36:13 GMT -5
Awesome! And same, I kind of stopped making templates and stuff for a while and just found other creations. But seeing everyone elses work, just motivated me!
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Post by Snowy SnowFalls on Jun 19, 2016 22:15:28 GMT -5
The eyes are a bit big, but it's really good!
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Post by Deleted on Jun 19, 2016 23:53:05 GMT -5
The eyes are a bit big, but it's really good! I think they're a good size. No need to change them. Plus, I think River already registered this dog? (Or is it just a template?) |
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Post by Snowy SnowFalls on Jun 20, 2016 8:43:48 GMT -5
Maybe, Mabye not ^^
In not sure,
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Post by Riverrun Kennel on Jun 20, 2016 13:10:22 GMT -5
It was just a template, but I tweaked it a little more and made Zara with it, then I registered her, what I did: I made the front of the snout less wide, the noze sticking out some more, the snout a little longer, and the head less wide. You guys can keep critiqing it if you want, but I'm gonna resign from making more borders for a while ^-^
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Post by Riverrun Kennel on Jun 23, 2016 21:01:12 GMT -5
Alright everyone, I am making another kennel, focusing mainly on Boxers, but also other shorthaired breeds  Here is my first boxer template:    What do you think? Please be COMPLETLEY honest and tell me how I can improve it. Thank you everyone <3 |
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Post by Snowy SnowFalls on Jun 23, 2016 21:04:16 GMT -5
I think it's great! (Cx)
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